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I really love this line "For the new colours on your crowded canvas." Do we really release or bury memories but write them as lines in our epic life poem. We may embellish or reshape moments but they always live with us.

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D A N G because these envision things and reminded me of distant memories and makes me feel nostalgic I really like these quoted below:

"I'll let it go.

And I won’t care

If you don’t care"

Yours is yours — in my eyes too.

No “should have been mine’s”

Or “hope it goes wrong’s”.

If we meet in some

Distant dull midweek -(I love this line)

I'll play my part

I'll make the talk small

I’ll be “an old friend”

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Jul 2, 2023·edited Jul 2, 2023

"In the blood of Eden, so we end as we began."

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